sexta-feira, 5 de dezembro de 2008

Composition 2- Freedom or choice?

There is no freedom without a social organization. Moreover, the balance between the exercise of this power and individual freedom is always precarious, requiring a constant negotiation. We must seek to harmonize the ideals and wishes with the personal life of society. It's true to say that the realization of individual freedoms could not be verified unless there is an organized society in institutions. So, the constitution of a country is very important because laws give effect to the rights and duties of citizens.
The laws of the Brazilian Constitution are much praised abroad, but are not put into practice here. In general, the Brazilian laws are fair.But, in my opinian,the law should be changed at some points that children under eighteen who commit heinous crimes should be arrested and tried for the crimes. I think cigarette should be banned in Brazil because is a drug as the others which are banned.

Um comentário:

Unknown disse...

Hey,

Would you explain me this? I didn't get it! I meant it is grammatically right, but it's a new idea to me.

" organized society in institutions."

Answer on another comment, plz

"Opinion" correct it!
"tried for crimes"????
"because IT is..." correct it!
"like" is better than "as"

It seems there's no end. Give one!

Good Luck!


Teacher